Friday, 10 October 2008

  • The Orange

    Creative
    Current mood: restless
    Category: Writing and Poetry

    I read, I write, I make crafts, I decorate,etc. WOW- its no wounder people call me creative alot. Well to prove that I have creative jucies in me heres a poem  I wrote awhile ago. I got it published and I got an acknowlgement award for it. This poem came about because of a class I took last year. There is a reason it is called The Orange, but thats a bit of a story.Well I hope you like my poem.... please fell free to comment.











     




    The sun lay
    in all its
    golden roundness
    in her palm.
    She remembered
    when
    it seemed so far away
    so far up in the sky.
    She would reach out her hand
    to grab it, but found it was to far
    away to reach.
    But now,
    as it lay,
    in all its
    in all its golden roundness,
    in the palm of her hand
    it seemed to her
    that
    the sun had set
    at last.
    THE END
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