Friday, 10 October 2008

  • Just Friends

    From the mind of RM Hamilton(me) comes a piece from my Creative Writing Project called... The way it should be.I got an A on my project witch of course is a great thing.And being the writer I am I would like to share with you my favorite piece from that project.(I warn all the guys reading this it is kinda romantic-at least I think so). It is called Just Friends and its a poem.

    Just Friends

    My friend and I stare in the

    remote darkness of this abandoned

    house watching the far off tiny

    stars wink out, one by one, giving life to

    daybreak. He says

    the stars become lifeless when

    they leave the night sky. He thinks

    the little stars wink and smile

    through the night like mindless robots

    and when they fall from the sky

    it is only to make me smile.

    But Jacob is naive and lonely

    and he thinks the world is in is hand.

    He does to realize

    what I believe to be true,

    that the stars wink and smile

    to give me a chance

    to share my real feelings with him-

    my friend who does not hold the world in his hand,

    but who hold my heart instead.

    As the last star fades away

    I tell him what is in my mind

    and the house that we had been camping out in

    somehow becomes a home

    just by the touch of two hands,

    two hearts,

    that had felt the same way

    for what seemed like forever.,

    but now knew each other better,

    because of the mindless robot stars,

    that winked and smiled,

    and that

    died with the dawn.

    THE END

    Ok so that was it, fell free to comment anytime you want to- Shelly Bunni <3

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