Friday, 10 October 2008
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Just Friends
From the mind of RM Hamilton(me) comes a piece from my Creative Writing Project called... The way it should be.I got an A on my project witch of course is a great thing.And being the writer I am I would like to share with you my favorite piece from that project.(I warn all the guys reading this it is kinda romantic-at least I think so). It is called Just Friends and its a poem.
Just Friends
My friend and I stare in the
remote darkness of this abandoned
house watching the far off tiny
stars wink out, one by one, giving life to
daybreak. He says
the stars become lifeless when
they leave the night sky. He thinks
the little stars wink and smile
through the night like mindless robots
and when they fall from the sky
it is only to make me smile.
But Jacob is naive and lonely
and he thinks the world is in is hand.
He does to realize
what I believe to be true,
that the stars wink and smile
to give me a chance
to share my real feelings with him-
my friend who does not hold the world in his hand,
but who hold my heart instead.
As the last star fades away
I tell him what is in my mind
and the house that we had been camping out in
somehow becomes a home
just by the touch of two hands,
two hearts,
that had felt the same way
for what seemed like forever.,
but now knew each other better,
because of the mindless robot stars,
that winked and smiled,
and that
died with the dawn.
THE END
Ok so that was it, fell free to comment anytime you want to- Shelly Bunni <3
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Comments (2)
Oh hey this was that mad lib poem wasnt it? I remember that one..mine was weird. =p
@altamitone - ha ha yea it was the mad lib one but it didnt go to good so i made it end the wrong way but the poem went great ..thank you mad libs <3 lol ....whats yours like? did i read it?? i forgets....