Friday, 10 October 2008

  • No Tittle No Editing = Now Tell Nana Everything LOL

    Song/Poem/THINGY.... (i made it up on the spot) not titled yet
    Current mood: crazy etc..... XD
    Category: Music

    Hey this is a song/poem i made up on the spot without ANY editing at all so hope u like it. PS it has not title yet, any sugestions for a title or of how to fix it up a bit are welcome. HOPE U LIKE IT!

    *GIRL SINGS:
    Hey.... I think its going to be ok now.
    Dont look at all my tears, im not crying, not really!
    I wana be loved by you ~ I wana be held by you
    I DONT WANT TO CRY THESE TEARS NO MORE!
    If I asked you to save me, WOULD YOU?
    If I asked you to let me go, WOULD YOU?
    HEY.... I think its going to be ALL ok now.
    Dont look at my tears, im not crying, not really!
    These tears that you see running down my face arent for real.

    *Her heart cries out so it can be heard(this is her heart speaking):
    HEY, these tears that she cries are full of pain! OWW there so real.
    Dont listen to her... she needs help and she needs love.
    Cant you hear her lies and her sighes? She is asking for a way out!
    OPEN THE DOOR>OWWWW> OPEN THE DOOR TO HER HEART>OWWW
    If she asked you to love her, WOULD YOU?
    If she asked you to keep her, WOULD YOU?
    HEY.... I think its going to be All ok(IF YOU HELP.... IF YOU HELP)
    She doesent want you to know shes sad.
    She wants to be happy, but she just cant help crying.
    SAVE HER IF YOU CAN! BUT NOTICE HER INSIDE VOICE

    *Girl sings:
    OWWWW>>> MY HEART SPEAKS TO ME>>>> AND IM SO CONFUSED!
    OWWW>>> THESE TEARS THAT I CRY I CRY YET I DONT KNOW WHY.

    *Girl and heart at once:
    OWWWW>>>> SAVE
    OWWWW>>>> LOVE
    OOWWWW>>> THESE TEARS COME DOWN SO MANY TIMES

    *GIRL askes questions:
    CAN ANYONE HEAR ME?
    DOES ANYONE CARE?
    PLEASE>>>> WILL NO ONE STOP THIS PAIN IN MY SOUL???

          THE END



    pss: this was written awhile ago from me posted to mypace, still not edited etc, have a good day <3

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